Shakespeare's Venus and Adonis
'Poor flower,' quoth she, 'this was thy father's guise,
Sweet issue of a more sweet-smelling sire,
For every little grief to wet his eyes:
To grow unto himself was his desire,
And so 'tis shine; but know, it is as good
To wither in my breast as in his blood.
Device | Example | Effect |
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Apostrophe | Venus addressing the flower directly | Creates intimate, personal relationship |
Generational Metaphor | Flower as Adonis's "issue" | Establishes familial connection |
Hereditary Traits | Flower inheriting father's weeping nature | Shows continuity of character |
Comparative Fragrance | Father "more sweet-smelling" than child | Establishes hierarchy of beauty |
Gentle Persuasion | "but know, it is as good" | Venus offers alternative to isolation |
Paradoxical Comfort | Withering as positive outcome | Reframes death as loving care |
Emotional Inheritance | Flower inherits tendency to weep sap | Transfers human emotion to plant |
Maternal Voice | Venus speaking as protective parent | Shows her adoption of flower |
This stanza presents Venus adopting the flower as Adonis's child and heir, while gently arguing against his inherited tendency toward solitude and self-sufficiency.
The Maternal Transformation: Venus shifts from lover to mother, addressing the flower as "sweet issue" and speaking with parental tenderness and authority. Her relationship with Adonis continues through generational care.
Hereditary Characteristics: Venus identifies that the flower has inherited Adonis's "guise" of weeping easily and preferring solitude. This suggests that essential character traits survive transformation and can be passed to offspring.
The Weeping Nature: Both Adonis and his flower-child share the tendency to "wet" their "eyes" (release moisture) at "every little grief." This creates continuity between human tears and plant sap.
The Preference for Solitude: Venus acknowledges that "to grow unto himself was his desire," recognizing Adonis's preference for independence over relationship. The flower inherits this isolating tendency.
Gentle Persuasion: Rather than forcing the flower into relationship, Venus uses gentle reasoningβ"but know, it is as good"βto suggest that love and care are equally valid choices.
The Democracy of Withering: Venus presents withering "in my breast" as equivalent to withering "in his blood," making her love equal to his natural origins. Both locations offer valid ways to complete the life cycle.
Protective Motherhood: By offering to let the flower "wither in my breast," Venus provides a loving environment for decline rather than abandonment to natural decay.
The Continuation of Character: The flower's inheritance of Adonis's emotional and social traits suggests that transformation preserves personality rather than just physical appearance.
Loving Acceptance: Venus accepts the flower's inherited nature while offering an alternative, showing mature love that respects choice while providing care.
The Cycle of Care: This stanza transforms Venus's frustrated romantic love into successful parental love, allowing her to finally nurture rather than overwhelm.
Sweet Gradation: The comparison of father and child's fragrances ("more sweet-smelling sire") suggests that beauty can be passed down through generations, though perhaps in diminished form.
This stanza shows Venus successfully transitioning from destructive romantic love to nurturing parental love, offering the flower-Adonis the care and choice that she couldn't provide to the human Adonis.