Shakespeare's Venus and Adonis
Here kennel'd in a brake she finds a hound,
And asks the weary caitiff for his master,
And there another licking of his wound,
Gainst venom'd sores the only sovereign plaster;
And here she meets another sadly scowling,
To whom she speaks, and he replies with howling.
Device | Example | Effect |
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Repetitive Structure | "Here...And there...And here" | Creates sense of systematic search and mounting evidence of disaster |
Personification | Dogs as "caitiff," "sadly scowling," able to "reply" | Gives animals human emotions and communication abilities |
Animal Communication | Venus speaking to dogs, dog replying with howling | Shows desperation driving Venus to seek answers from any source |
Medical Imagery | "licking...wound," "venom'd sores," "sovereign plaster" | Uses healing imagery to suggest both injury and natural remedies |
Parallel Structure | Each couplet presents a new wounded dog | Builds pattern that suggests widespread carnage |
Foreshadowing | Wounded, hiding dogs suggest their master's fate | The dogs' condition implies what happened to Adonis |
Pathetic Fallacy | Dogs showing human-like sorrow | Projects human emotions onto animals to reflect Venus's emotional state |
Escalation | From hiding to wounded to howling with grief | Builds sense of increasing disaster and loss |
This stanza marks Venus's growing realization that something terrible has happened during the hunt. Through her encounters with the wounded and distressed hunting dogs, she pieces together evidence of disaster while maintaining desperate hope that she can still find Adonis alive.
The Evidence Mounts: Each dog Venus encounters provides more evidence that the hunt has gone badly. From hiding in fear to nursing wounds to howling with grief, the dogs tell a story of catastrophe without words.
Communication Through Suffering: Venus's attempt to speak with the dogs shows her desperation to find information about Adonis. When language fails, the dogs communicate through their wounds and howls—a more honest communication than human speech.
Natural vs. Artificial Healing: The image of the dog licking its wound "the only sovereign plaster" suggests that natural, instinctive healing is more effective than human medicine. This reflects the poem's ongoing theme of natural wisdom versus artificial rhetoric.
Foreshadowing Tragedy: The systematic presentation of wounded dogs foreshadows Adonis's fate. If all the hunting dogs are wounded, hiding, and grieving, the implication for their master is ominous.
The Failure of Hierarchy: Venus, a goddess, is reduced to questioning "weary caitiffs"—wretched animals. This shows how love and fear have stripped away her divine authority, making her dependent on the lowest creatures for information.
Emotional Contagion: The dogs' emotions (fear, pain, grief) mirror and amplify Venus's own growing dread. Their suffering becomes a reflection of her internal state.
The Hunt's Aftermath: This stanza shows the aftermath of violent human activity (hunting) on the natural world. The wounded animals represent the cost of human pursuits that Venus warned against.
Pattern of Loss: The repetitive structure ("Here...And there...And here") creates a relentless pattern that suggests loss is everywhere Venus looks. There's no escape from evidence of disaster.
Primitive Communication: The howling response to Venus's speech suggests that in moments of extremity, all beings—divine and animal—are reduced to basic expressions of pain and loss.
This stanza effectively builds suspense and dread while showing Venus's growing desperation and the widespread consequences of the hunt she tried to prevent Adonis from joining.